Saturday, March 7, 2009

QUICKSAND

I RUN
BUT IT KEEPS PULLING ME
I TRY TO GET OUT
BUT IM ASPHYXIATED
LEAVING ME BREATHLESS
DEFENSELESS
I CANT GET OUT
WITH EACH STEP I TAKE
I AM PULLED BACK
LOGIC TELLS ME TO BOLT
ESCAPE FROM THE HYSTERIA
BUT MY HEART DRAWS ME
TEMPTS ME TO PLUNGE
INTO YOUR QUICKSAND...


Candice Sandiego-March 7, 2009
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1 comment:

  1. RahulMarch 8, 2009 at 12:16 AM

    A nice way to convey the constrictive feeling , which can be felt sometimes when there is just a bit too much of passionate love...

    Sometimes its essential to give space in a relationship . Too much of crowding can be a really bad thing and might just asphyxiate the relationship . I think you have done a fair job of expressing that :) keep on!!

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